Another man speaks

Original content: "The young boy quickly ran to catch the bus that was about to leave. He barely made it in time, panting heavily as he climbed aboard. The bus driver gave him a nod of approval before continuing on the route. The boy found a seat near the back and settled in for the ride. As the bus pulled away, he looked out the window at the passing scenery with a sense of relief."

Revised content: Quickly running, the young boy caught the bus just before it left. Panting heavily, he barely made it on time and received a nod of approval from the bus driver. Finding a seat at the back, he settled in for the ride. Watching the passing scenery with relief, he looked out the window as the bus pulled away.

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